Thursday, 10 November 2016

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Crack crack as the twigs in the forest broke as I was strolling up the steep hill I could smell outstanding food. Chicken,ice cream I sprinted as fast as I could be for all the food was gone. Thorns on vines scratched and left marks on russell the bush went a loud terrifying roar came out.

 Shivers went up my spine more russells  and it came out oh it was just an owl I was terrified so many creepy eyes. I screamed they all went grrrr!! I’m out of here I said AHHHHHH! I ran as fast as I could I fell down and tumbled on the floor.I saw a pinch of smoke YIPEE!

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